I really like the way you wrote Michael's thoughts. We so rarely see a sweet Michael in fanfic. I love that he might go to Ted for fashion advice--that's so funny. :)
Cowlip did wrote the character of Michael very inconsistently. There were many episodes and scenes where I felt he demonstrated growth and maturity and many where he was childish and selfish. The problem was that both scenarios were true throughout each season. It wasn't a steady growth, with momentary backsliding (which would be normal--we all do that), his behavior was like a roller coaster.
Hey now, MIchael... Brian did a good job for you when you went to see Dr. Dave the first time.... Who he shouldn't ask is Emmett, as much as I love him, lol.
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Which irritates me. Of course it doesn't help that so often Cowlip wrote him as clueless and whiny.
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Your Michael voice is excellent too. :)
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He did look good but remember after? He told Brian he felt as though he was dressed up as someone else.
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Go away, Wilma!
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Thanks, in my world Michael is the good friend and not the pychotic evil one that shows up so often :-)
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